Ney☆Ru
The song of the stars resounds everywhere.
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Apathy, indifference, or little to no importance for his unexpected situation.
I'm not telling you to create 3 whole chapters of a confused and scared MC, but at least add something that makes me feel like the MC is an ordinary earthbound human who has never experienced magic before.
I've read about 40 stories (yes, I've counted) where the protagonist simply sees an object that makes him recognize where it is and seconds later completely accepts it without even hesitation or feeling any emotion.
"Ah yeah, I'm in DxD, cool" = Automatically stop seeing it. We are emotional, we can get confused, we feel things. To believe otherwise is to grossly overestimate yourself or be a complete idiot. It's worse when the reason is simply trying to create a character "ChadSigmaPhonkHarénWaifuKiritio"
It's embarrassing.
I'm not telling you to create 3 whole chapters of a confused and scared MC, but at least add something that makes me feel like the MC is an ordinary earthbound human who has never experienced magic before.
I've read about 40 stories (yes, I've counted) where the protagonist simply sees an object that makes him recognize where it is and seconds later completely accepts it without even hesitation or feeling any emotion.
"Ah yeah, I'm in DxD, cool" = Automatically stop seeing it. We are emotional, we can get confused, we feel things. To believe otherwise is to grossly overestimate yourself or be a complete idiot. It's worse when the reason is simply trying to create a character "ChadSigmaPhonkHarénWaifuKiritio"
It's embarrassing.