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  1. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    "fourth" at minimum, and probably "third- or fourth-hand" Um... Gamma radiation punches through just about everything. It's alpha radiation that's blocked by skin. "removes" I think.

  2. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    I think you meant "blade" instead of "black"? Joshua, at least according to his wiki page.

  3. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    "sight lines", though you can keep the hyphen if you prefer it

  4. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    out-produce super-Earth bear witness hyper-efficient Either "depositing a drone camera" or "depositing drone cameras"

  5. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Well. I've been away for a while because work has been absolutely obliterating my free time, but I finally got caught up with work... so now I'm finally caught up with WTR! Here's the pile of corrections that's been accumulating in my quotes:

  6. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Remind me who this is? breach Slipstream's You said "Nebulon" earlier (capital letter, different vowel). https://tfwiki.net/wiki/Nebulan says it's -an instead of -on outside of G1. Extra space before the full stop. I think the "in" is extraneous?

  7. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    You're right... in our world. But the fic doesn't take place in our world. It takes place in a comic book world. And in a comic book world, a lot of pop-psych stuff is significantly more likely to ring true.

  8. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    In case the SI ever gets curious about what that geometric shape is called, it's "frustum."

  9. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Missed part of the correction: "scrap" should be "scrape" You COULD? That's impressive, I figured you would be one of the Pauls that wants to stay human. (I think you meant "it could be".)

  10. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Either "A rap of my knuckles and a scrape of my fingernails" or "I rap my knuckles and scrape my fingernails" I think you meant "to my guards"?

  11. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    look around Missing the ' after alright.

  12. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Huh, I guess you just didn't post about fixing it, so I assumed you hadn't. My bad! It's

  13. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Isn't it "Triskele"? Consistently misspelled. need to be And reposting one that slipped under the radar earlier: off

  14. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    off

  15. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Either you're missing a line break, or you have an extra one. Not sure which you intended.

  16. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Is "whatever" in this context a Britishism? I would have expected either "however" or "wherever."

  17. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    The word "rent" is already the past tense of "rend." So "rented" is like... well, "bented." If you don't want to say "rent and bent" you can validly say "rended and bent" though that's a slight Americanism according to the dictionary. Strange final punctuation. changes public Capitalization...

  18. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    affect Bondo? :P

  19. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    kaahuite its

  20. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Oh gdi
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