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Who is this strange fellow of whom you speak? We know no "Du Hansard".[X] Nah, but you should look for a partner before you head in
-[X] Du Hansard
Don't use HTML. Use BBCode. [hr], not <hr>.Huh. The html code for lines didn't work and editing on my phone is a sisyphean torture, so I'll fix it when I'm on a computer.
Whatever. I still can't edit it properly until I'm not on mobile.
Just a missing comma for an introductory phrase.Decision made, you turn toward the direction of the smell, your greater height pretty easily allowing you to see over the crowd, and set off for the brightly colored pavilion venting smoke.
Massive run-on sentence. it's/its confusion.A minor incident of almost stepping on a pixie aside, you don't have too much trouble on the way,. mMost people around here seem to be minding their own business or focuses in their own little groups,. tThe delicious smelling pavilion is pretty big too, and it's its wide entrance is actually tall enough that you only have to duck a little to enter.
Should be two sentences, or at least separated by a semicolon.
Use em dash separation for an incomplete modifying phrase.He has a lot of jewelry for a guy you notice, — lots of little glinting bracelets and rings and way too many jeweled piercings dangling from his pointy ears.
Comma splice.It's not like you're trying to sneak in or something,. "After that welcome I figured I could use something to drink."
Run-on paragraph."Well, you have come to the right place then,. yYou will find no wider selection of fine drinks here," he responds, cheerful tone never wavering,. "I admit, the welcome is a bit bracing. At least you were not one of those left smoking in the grass though, yes?"
Massive run-on. your/you're confusion.You nod even as your eyes scan over the selection behind him, eventually alighting on a woefully small bottle you recognize as a Black Mountain vintage,; your you're surprised a foreigner got ahold of some of that clans clan's work,. "Oh, that weird message said the tower welcomed everyone,. wWas it lying?" you ask curiously, before pointing out the bottle behind him,. "How much for that? Also, you have a menu or something?"
More of the same."I think you will find, young lady, that fewer and fewer shopkeepers accept anything but shards for their wares," he replies,. "Of course, in my great kindness, I accept simple coin from newcomers,; consider it a friendly warning for the future. The spirits will cost you three silver,. sShould you take a seat, one of my waitresses will see you served a meal shortly."
Duplication of "you suppose". A few different rewrites are possible, but this seems the simplest.You grumble at the cost, but you suppose if your coins are going to become worthless, you suppose it doesn't matter.
More comma splices.As you dig out the coins you also remember your manners, such as they are,. "Oh yeah, I'm Yuuka,. wWhat's your name? It's weird thinking of you as 'the elf'."
Massive run-on paragraph.You roll your eyes,. tThis guy lays on the salesman shtick a little thick, but he doesn't seem bad, precisely,. "If your food is as good as it smells, I guess I might be," you reply as you turn away, bottle in hand, and scan for an empty seat,. tThere are plenty of them though, so you make your way to the closest and have a seat,. tThe bench at the table groans a little under your weight, but holds just fine.
Couple missing words, and a comma splice.You let out a happy sigh,; the bottle is even runed to keep it at the perfect temperature.
Missed capitalizing a sentence. Comma splice.Well that and the dull, empty eyes. More than a few of the customers don't seem to mind ogling them despite that. tThey serve their purpose though, and your order gets collected and delivered efficiently and without error,. yYou kinda wonder where the heck Gemos got fresh fish so far inland, but he's pretty clearly some kind of wizard, so you don't put too much thought into the matter.
Comma splice.Inventory has been changed since previous iterations,. rRather than being based on strength, every character begins with ten slots, which can be modified by equipment or skills.
Left out a word. Comma splice.Permanent items fit one to a slot,; consumables and [???] can be held five to a slot.
Comma splice.The currency one has been answered, but other questions remain,. yYou suppose the obvious one to ask is Gemnus, seeing as you know he won't just blow you off, but business does look to be picking up so he's also kinda busy.
Comma splice. too/to confusion.Looking around you try to figure out who you should talk too to,. oObviously you want to ask someone who isn't a total newbie like you, but how do you tell who is and who isn't?
Missing a comma after the introductory phrase.Especially with elves, the difference is pretty slight compared to what you were used to.
Couple comma splices, and a missing comma.You squint at the figure on his shoulder,. mMaybe a pixie or something? She has the wings for it,. nNo matter, though.
Misspelled name. Comma splices. Missing comma."My name is Murdan,. Murdabn Mall'eoch," he responds with an aggrieved sigh,. "Please do not give strangers odd ideas, Great Spirit."
Comma splice."No, there is not really a central authority here," he admits,. "I do believe some kingdoms tried, but, well, just yesterday I saw a noblewoman arrive with an entire platoon of guards in tow. The only survivors were herself and the captain of her guard. I suspect this place prevents any gathering of significant armed forces, though what mechanism it does so by is…"
Comma splice."So nobody I need permission from, got it," you interrupt,. yYou feel a little bad, but you aren't here for a full course on whatever magic runs the tower.
Massive run-on. Missing comma."I guess you must be able to as well, since nobody's taken your stuff yet,." iIt's only polite to respond to a compliment with a compliment,. Sylph laughs, and Murdan doesn't quite seem to know how to take your words,. "Right, so what's it like in the tower? How far along are people on their way to the top?"
Comma splices."As for what it is like…" he grimaces again,. "Packed with monsters,. iIt seems the first floor is largely full of undead."
Comma splice.You consider it,. fFighting alone is always a bit dicey, but it's not like you have any reason to trust this guy.
Not sure I approve of innocent Yuuka-[] If squishing skellies is easy, then it's no trouble letting him hide behind your non-existent skirts. He should really work on his stamina issues, though. Nobody wants a guy that can't last. (Why is Sylph giggling?)
Well, it could just be oblivious Yuuka, who doesn't think when she says stuff, or even have effeminate elf boys on her radar.
Obviously she should have shiny scaled androgynous fish people on her radar instead, because they look like treasure.Well, it could just be oblivious Yuuka, who doesn't think when she says stuff, or even have effeminate elf boys on her radar.
She's an oni not a dragon. Dwarfs and Pandaren Brew masters or bust.Obviously she should have shiny scaled androgynous fish people on her radar instead, because they look like treasure.
Unlike a sonic screwdriver, Du can triplicate the alcohol content of liquor.She's an oni not a dragon. Dwarfs and Pandaren Brew masters or bust.
Oh shush, you'll get your turn Let me savor this. With your write-in, (s)he might be the next one!Obviously she should have shiny scaled androgynous fish people on her radar instead, because they look like treasure.
Actually Im thinking the gear payoff for beating tower bosses would be worth more than the XP from grinding. And whats more by killing the tower bosses first and then getting the next set of gear before other people we can then sell the old gear for large amounts.Oh shush, you'll get your turn Let me savor this. With your write-in, (s)he might be the next one!
Honestly I do not care about splitting xp due to high party numbers by the way. Grinding Quests are boring, it's the interaction with an interesting cast that matters!
EDIT: within reason of course. Managing a whole fucking guild would be too much bookkeeping. But a team of all the yrsillar-approved chargen options? Let's do this, people!
If a Boss only drops one Chunk , having to kill 4+ bosses before we get our first Chunk of Deucite is going to be a right pain. So yeah, I am in it for the XP/Deucite too.Actually Im thinking the gear payoff for beating tower bosses would be worth more than the XP from grinding. And whats more by killing the tower bosses first and then getting the next set of gear before other people we can then sell the old gear for large amounts.
Edit it in. Nobody here will complainOh snap, I should have called the Ice Spirit Elsa; with a proviso that her summoning involves a ban against singing.
Bossy stuff has the issues to, from my understand, be the only ones to drop the bigger Deucites.... and you need those for skills over C. I don't fancy having to do the same boss 10 times just to have his Deucite drop onceIf Murden fits more into utility niche than pure burst, we may want someone thievy instead. Of course, it may work to just meet a lot of people and partner with different ones in different runs. We'll probably want numbers for bossy stuff so shifting up party membership rather than slipping right into a set team might really help.
the way i see it, we are going to be clearly carrying him early on.but when we start encountering higher level boss monsters that drop bigger deucites we are going to want a proper party to defeat themBossy stuff has the issues to, from my understand, be the only ones to drop the bigger Deucites.... and you need those for skills over C. I don't fancy having to do the same boss 10 times just to have his Deucite drop once