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A 40-year-old woman asking her 17-year-old "dad" on how to win a man over.

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A 40-year-old woman asking her 17-year-old "dad" on how to win a man over.
A 40-year-old woman asking her 17-year-old "dad" on how to win a man over.![]()
That would undermine his whole character and that of Blake's as well, at least in my opinion.I had an idea for Adam. Based on Sasuke Uchiha and Zechs Merquise.
Sasuke wanted to become a threat to keep the world united together against a common enemy. He reasoned that without a common enemy, there would be no incentive for peace. Zechs Merquise did the same.
So in much the same way, Adam... Is an idealist. He wants Faunus and human equality. He wants peace. He wants Blake's dream... But his way to achieve it is to become the ultimate bad guy. He joins Salem as her Dark Knight and encourages her to show herself to the world. To unite the world against Salem. And he is willing to give up his life to help facilitate true peace and victory over her.
In other words he's just as much of a drama queen as Blake.
Sith Nana is just Mysterious Heroine X Alter in full dark armor [fgo saber wars] and Jaune just shows why he was called equal to Salem in planning and manipulation by CRWBYSNIP
Sith!Nana: "I... Um... Hmm... You're not wrong, sweetie. I may need to rethink some things..."
So is Sith!Nana like Darth Vectivus then?As a tangent based on the Jedi!Jaune series, it might be amusing to twist it. Jaune's Nana is actually a Sith, though she's tried to hide her darker impulses. None of her children or grandchildren were Force Sensitive... Until Jaune. So she decided to begin to raise Jaune up as a proper apprentice.
Unfortunately Jaune is so kind and good hearted that he just keeps on the Lightside despite her best efforts. He's basically like a Lightside!Sith Warrior in SW:TOR.
That would undermine his whole character and that of Blake's as well, at least in my opinion.
Adam is based on the fairytale character the beast, while Blake is based on Belle, you know, the dude who got cursed because he was a selfish asshole, kidnapped and imprisoned someone and tried to force them to love him just to break that curse (not to mention the stockholm syndrome aspects).
Yes, the Beast does have good/redeemable aspects (how much really depends on the version), but from the ground up, the relationship of Adam and Blake deliberately the most horrible version of that, so not exactly healthy or good morally.
Adam's treatment of Blake wouldn't really work if he was secretly a good guy, as he is the cause behind a big part of Blake's character and personality, and the big part of her personally traumatic backstory.
Making him a secret good guy takes away from the few good aspects of Blake's characters that are left (I too can shit on Blake crying "racism" at everything, her messed up shipping with Yang and whatnot more, but that part of her backstory is one of the few good things that stuck around after everyone's personality/character started sliding downhill after Monty's unfortunate passing).
Adam is basically a dark reflection on the Faunus fight for equality and Blake, as he's what happens when you take that way too far and make it about getting revenge and becomming the abuser in power rather than the victom, perpetuating the cycle of exploitation and abuse.
Even the reviel later on of his branding scar doesn't make his actions any better, it gives some sympathy for his origin, but he shows that he was a victom and still chose to directly abused Blake in multiple ways (including during their relationship), stalkes her, vows and actively tries to destroy/kill everything that Blake loves for petty reasons, and has actively murdered most of his own underlings for petty shit like disagreeing with him.
Sasuke Uchiha and Zechs Merquise were made to be heroic from the beginning (even if Sasuke clearly planned to have a path to darkness).
Adam was made from the ground up to be a bad guy, a villain, and unlike Salem, is scary because he's far more realistic.
He's an abuser and violent narcissist who blames everyone else for his failiures, wants to gain power over others (in multiple different ways, like control over Blake's life) and turn the other race of people into slaves for his race (and in Volume 5, he literally changes clothing to a militarized grey suit that resembles a Nazi uniform).
There are people like that in real life.
Trying to make him into a good guy doesn't work (in my opinion) as he was made to be a villain, but it's okay to have someone made purely to be a villain, as they drive characters and the plot forward, good obstacles to overcome.
While I agree, and he does need more nuance, I don't think that trying to make him a martyr who sacrifices himself to becomes a shared target of hatred is the way to go about it.Yeah but they failed at that. They made him an incel and abuser when he should have been more tragic: A heroic figure, a freedom fighter twisted by his rage and hatred into a monster worse than those who abused him. Yes you could make him a villain and yes he could still be bad with a bad ending, but he needed some actual nuance-He had to be more of a Magneto than the Strawman they made him.
And indeed, if he was inspired by the Beast from Beauty and the Beast, he could have had a path to redemption.
I offer this path not to make him redeemed, but more that he is complex. He is tragic and perhaps misguided. He is devoted to Blake's beliefs but takes them in a twisted, violent direction. He feels if he is a massive villain, a threat, and makes it so he is to blame for everything, his and Blake's aims will be achieved. There will be true equality if everyone is united against a common threat-Namely, himself and Salem. But this doesn't mean he is right to do this, or that it will work. Much like Sasuke was wrong for believing that only a common enemy could unite all people on Earth.
That's like princess treatment/damsel in distress taken to its logical extreme.So a weird Weiss harem idea hit me.
Weiss hereditary semblance is a mutated version. Instead of summoning Grimm she summons alternate versions of people she knows. From pirates to knights to mad scientist and more.
And all of them only have one thing in common. They are head over heels for Weiss.
I am gonna need the source for this Big Dog.Jaune just shows why he was called equal to Salem in planning and manipulation by CRWBY
this remind me of a story i read yesterday, give me a moment to find the quote.Sith Nana is just Mysterious Heroine X Alter in full dark armor [fgo saber wars] and Jaune just shows why he was called equal to Salem in planning and manipulation by CRWBY
Dark Sider!Jaune using the power of hate on human trafficker's [the crown] terrorist [WF] and crime families [the spiders] and being his wholesome self the second they are done killing, just like how Ruby snipes for headshots and is still the cookie gremlin...
Salem about to be usurped as Remnants dark lord
it's a Transformers SI over on SB if any of are interested.The Monster of Kaon by ruijard said:"Maximus does not like violence. However, he also knows that many times, violence is a necessary act to get the point across. To that end, he always falls back on his practicality during a fight in order to quickly and efficiently end said fight. He does this by suppressing his emotional matrix, leaving behind a cold and calculating mind that only knows the most efficient ways to dismantle a Cybertronian."
"To him, and to the majority of us, such a way of fighting and thinking is a valuable asset. But to the younger bots who have yet to witness the true horrors of an existential war, such a paradoxical existence, a bot who was laughing with you warmly just a few seconds ago, only to turn around and coldly slaughter his enemy in the most painful way possible, would terrify them to a great extent."
I would rather suggest a Mulan esque "Be a Man" montage of GoD and Jaune because he is simply suffocating in overly curious women and last time he came across so much of feminine curiosity was Salem pre annihilation , and he knew he would have to deal with this nuisance as well minus the powers he had so he comes to conclusion.He decides fuck it he's not dealing with cuddlers and hides with the nearest source of testosterone.
Jaune.
If she gets her hands on him now she'll be delighted to learn three things.
If RWBY was a great story that didn't constantly face problems and pacing issues and wasn't totally carried by fanfiction and Tumblr, I would pat them on their back for avoiding cliché.So, definitely understand how people can see this, and in hindsight we probably shouldn't have let some elements be so similar, but no, Jaune and Salem aren't related.
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that bit with the puppy reminded we of this.
I don't see Ruby as a big tattoo girl but maybe a small memorial tattoo of a rose for her mom?
Much like Sasuke was wrong for believing that only a common enemy could unite all people on Earth.
I mean this kind of moral quandary has been staple for stories for such a long time that you can't say someone ripped someone off.Did the author of Naruto rip off Watchmen to come up with that?
What about Ren?
Did the author of Naruto rip off Watchmen to come up with that?
I mean this kind of moral quandary has been staple for stories for such a long time that you can't say someone ripped someone off.
You have one side that believes in a gradual and strictly monitored change in the system for the better so that no one get's left behind or is hurt during the transition towards better systems and the other believes in uniting people through a total and complete annihilation of current system and making themselves the sole authority in one way or another.
You have Professor X and Magneto, you have Robute Guilliman and Konrad Kurze(also both of their character design actually look like "Chadified" version of Naruto and Sasuke if you think about it), plus many other.