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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

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To be honest it's Vaermina, whose almost always wrong, almost always accusing Zoat of doing something that breaks his own canon, and whose takes have been repeatedly off base. It's safe to say you can ignore whatever they have to say on a given subject when it comes to WTR YJ.
 
Mr Zoat said:
"That's The Sensational Sucker to you!"
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I hear there's one born every minute.
Mr Zoat said:
"Don't worry! Kryptonite doesn't work on kryptonians from parallel universe! I'll go and throw this into the sun right away!"
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That's.... Very suspicious, borderline outside context knowledge.
Let's hope she's right.
Ngamer11 said:
What are the odds New Kara will have a little crush on Paul, making it 3 out of 5 Supergirls who are attracted to him?
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Obvious author appeal is obvious.
 
Ngamer11 said:
Mr Zoat, just to confirm, Kara stuck the coins inside of her "secret compartment" and Dana sucked them out?


Since Paul used gold kryptonite, Kara only had magic coins protecting her, and they don't protect clothing like her powers do. When Noriel used her flames, she was fine, but her clothes weren't.
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iamnuff said:
Also, it's lucky for Dana that Noriel turned her H-dial off, becuase i'm pretty sure Paul would have stomped her flat.
I mean, Kara thought so too, but...


All of her clothes burned off. She's been naked for like half of this scene.
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Mr Zoat said:
Yesterday, when the SI and Noriel attacked her.

Yes.
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So she was fighting nude???

Kalem will remember that.
 
Cuchulin said:
Would have been better to keep the Kryptonite around for study and potentially use against evil/rouge Kryptonians.
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They already have as much kryptonite as they want from Kara's asteroid. But they don't keep large amounts on Earth and the small amounts they have are in highly secure places.
 
Chaoswind said:
Why did Dana make a push NOW when she was significantly weaker than when she had the coins... This absolutely makes no sense unless becoming a vacuum messed with her head.
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Because she got the coins back when she sucked them out of Kara.
DiceArt said:
To be honest it's Vaermina, whose almost always wrong, almost always accusing Zoat of doing something that breaks his own canon, and whose takes have been repeatedly off base. It's safe to say you can ignore whatever they have to say on a given subject when it comes to WTR YJ.
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Tell you what, Vaermina. When Vault Dwelling for Sanity and Profit starts updating again I will remove you from my blocked list and answer exactly one of your complaints.
 
Mr Zoat said:
"Don't worry! Kryptonite doesn't work on kryptonians from parallel universe! I'll go and throw this into the sun right away!"
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... New Kara, how do you supposedly know this to supposedly be true?

I'm still suspicious of her, even without potential Black Kryptonite effects.
Mr Zoat said:
Did you know that Ironheart was a porn film before it was a superhero comic?
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Y'know, funnily enough I just happened to watch a video earlier that commented on that fact. Honestly, I was more surprised that Iron Man/Tony Stark was being/had been replaced since I barely bother with anything from Marvel's actual comics stuff.
Chojin Patriarch said:
...I am amazed neither you nor Kara are laughing yet...
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I'm just thinking now... has Paul ever really laughed in the story? I can't really think of him doing anything more than either an amused smile or maybe a chuckle, but not actual laughter.
 
Dakkan Sall said:
I'm just thinking now... has Paul ever really laughed in the story? I can't really think of him doing anything more than either an amused smile or maybe a chuckle, but not actual laughter.
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I can think of 2 examples. Him laughing at Theo Adam bragging about fighting Wisconsin, and laughing after finding out that Hitler's clone is married to a black woman.
 
I'm honestly curious as to whether or not Paul will write in the report that Evil!Kara went so far as to put the magic coins inside of herself to keep them from being stolen. Can you imagine the reaction of anyone who reads that would have?
 
I wonder if Kara will talk to Zatanna about this. 'Teenage girls who went crazy because of a weird crystal combined with a serious crush on Paul, and attacked him' is a very small group (that hopefully will remain small), but a small support group is better than none.
 
Prince Charon said:
I wonder if Kara will talk to Zatanna about this. 'Teenage girls who went crazy because of a weird crystal combined with a serious crush on Paul, and attacked him' is a very small group (that hopefully will remain small), but a small support group is better than none.
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If Paul had a nickel for every time that happened to him, he'd have no nickels, because modern coinage is functionally worthless compared to its face value and Orange Lantern abhors that.

But it'd still be odd it's happened twice.
 
Okay, so clearly I got lost somewhere along the way. If I'm understanding correctly now, the "native to universe 16" Kara, that Paul rescued from her escape pod, got exposed to a piece of black kryptonite from Nylor Trugg's stash. That made her lose all impulse control & "evil" as well as deciding she wanted some "vitamin D" from OL and she was gonna get it or people were gonna get hurt. As for where I got lost, for some reason I was thinking this was the silver age Supergirl rather Universe 16 Kara.
 
Mr Zoat said:
"Yeah, see, now I feel bad about this? But I work for the Legion of Super-Heroes, and… You're… Kind of accused of breaking the law."
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Don't get this. Why is she picking a fight she knows full well she has no hope of winning?

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Because she got the coins back when she sucked them out of Kara.
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Still makes no sense. She had the coins for ages and had several significantly better opportunities to attack. She could confidently have expected to still have the coins for the foreseeable future, and presumably could have called in other league members for help with a pre-planned attack later.
Why she she pick now, when she is a vacuum cleaner and Orange Lantern had multiple allies to hand, to try and arrest him?
 
WereDragon said:
Don't get this. Why is she picking a fight she knows full well she has no hope of winning?

Still makes no sense. She had the coins for ages and had several significantly better opportunities to attack. She could confidently have expected to still have the coins for the foreseeable future, and presumably could have called in other league members for help with a pre-planned attack later.

Why she she pick now, when she is a vacuum cleaner and Orange Lantern had multiple allies to hand, to try and arrest him?
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You know the meme 'the risk I took was calculated, but boy am I bad at maths'?

Dana isn't trained as a soldier or superhero. She has fought a few times, but she wins through brute strength. Her thoughs were that the SI and Noriel were beaten up, and that she could probably suck the ring off the SI's finger. Unfortunately, while she's heard of the H-Dial she wasn't all that familiar with how it worked.
 
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You know the meme 'the risk I took was calculated, but boy am I bad at maths'?

Dana isn't trained as a soldier or superhero. She has fought a few times, but she wins through brute strength. Her thoughs were that the SI and Noriel were beaten up, and that shse could probably suck the ring off the SI's finger. Unfortunately, while she's heard of the H-Dial she wasn't all that familiar with how it worked.
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…fair.

Although I must say that whatever brainiac thought that sending her, alone and untrained, to resolve OL smashing the status quo was a good idea needs his head examined.
 
WereDragon said:
…fair.

Although I must say that whatever brainiac thought that sending her, alone and untrained, to resolve OL smashing the status quo was a good idea needs his head examined.
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He didn't. He sent her so that the other three would have someone around who could navigate the 21st century. The job was supposed to be 'stop the Persuader killed Superman', but then things got complicated and then they lost contact with the future.
 
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Mr Zoat said:
He didn't. He sent her so that the other three would have someone around who could navigate the 21st century. The job was supposed to be 'stop the Persuader killed Superman', but then things got complicated nad then they lost contact with the future.
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What have they been doing then, both in the Paragon timeline and the Renegade timeline? Last I checked, Saturn Girl was a friend of Lynne's from the psychic school. What's the name of that place anyway, as I don't remember it?
 
If taken out of context...
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"That's The Sensational Sucker to you!"
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Mr Zoat said:
"We do need this place cleaned up a little. I mean, you definitely can't hurt me with those things."
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Now add a skirt, because this is a child-friendly technological abomination.
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!!!Whatthe!!!
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Thank you H-Dial.

Kara is clearly as puzzled as I am, but at least this new stimulus has her attention.

"Does it come with instructions?"

"Ah… No, actually."
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"Okay, I think I've got it.
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"We do need this place cleaned up a little. I mean, you definitely can't hurt me with those things."

"Okay, let me-."

WWWWWRRRRHHHHHHH!
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Oh gods I can already see where this is going. The Dial must have some sort of twisted artificial intelligence.
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Mr Zoat said:
"Yes, good. Can you suck bigger objects too?"

"Let's find out, bitch."

The Sensational Sucker raises her suckers and points them at Kara.
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Mr Zoat said:
Dana thrusts her hoses at Kara
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Kara starts to lunge, then falls to the ground as the coins are sucked out of her.

"OOgh!"

I immediately wrap her in construct chains and haul her out of the way-

"Ugh. Hah!"

-before adding a straitjacket -.

"Kinky."

Underwear and a straitjacket.

Kara pulls against them for a moment, then relaxes. "What now, lover boy?"
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What happened to you? Why is Other Kara tied up like that?"

"Sometimes adults-."
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Tags: Toys, Bondage,
Think Mr Zoat might have gotten his eroverse and mainverse chapter files mixed up.
How long do we got before Rule 34 engages?
 
I've been wanting to re-read the start of this story for a while. Since I've just caught up, now seemed like a good time.

I must say, Paul not noting the exact time at the beginning and instead just saying "morning" feels kinda strange.

Mr Zoat said:
Her attention shifts back to Mr Scott.

"Do you plan on giving [the lantern] to him?"

Million dollar question. I'd certainly like to know.
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Half a billion dollar, actually.
 
Oh boy, I'm several weeks behind on all the stories I'm reading on QQ except for WTR now (I filled out a CYOA for like a week, please don't ask, and things just kept compounding from there), and since I'm too scared to catch up on everything at this point it looks like I'm only here for WTR until I can convince myself that getting caught up is a good idea.

In that vein, the recent chapters have been fun, so thanks for the excellent work as always Mr Zoat.

Someone please help me.
 
Darko said:
Yeah, if Clark gets infected then everyone is screwed.
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Yeah it wouldn't end well at all for the planet

hkim said:
Someone really needs to turn New Kara down to like, a six. She's been at about eleven since she woke up and it's exhausting.
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Listen this girl only goes to 11 so we'll just have to get a laser pointer or something to tire her out.

Cuchulin said:
Would have been better to keep the Kryptonite around for study and potentially use against evil/rouge Kryptonians.
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He knows where Krypton is so getting more won't be much of an issue if he needs it.

Mr Zoat said:
"That's The Sensational Sucker to you!"
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Oh god the Jokes just write themselves.

Chaoswind said:
Why did Dana make a push NOW when she was significantly weaker than when she had the coins... This absolutely makes no sense unless becoming a vacuum messed with her head.
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Yeah I wouldn't be too surprised of the H-Dial does have a detrimental effect to ones intellect.
I mean she's already time traveling with the Legion so it was always bound to go wrong but the dial just makes it worse.
 
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