Duke Long
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'so bound'?And the sad thing is that he's not even asking in a schadenfreudian way. Diabo is genuinely concerned about her wellbeing, because… Because a slanted report to the Senate could ruin everything? Because he doesn't want to make an enemy if she decides to blame him for her hardship? Because he doesn't want her to throw up on him and get his uniform dirty? All of those are in the mix, but they're all bound up in the bundle of instincts and fears that make up Diabo that it's a little hard to tell which has precedence at any one time. The only thing I'm really sure about it that it's not compassion because I'd feel that due to it disrupting our connection.
Ought the full stop be green rather than orange? Not necessarily a problem, just looks a tad queer to me and I can't remember how you usually handle it.Dame Bozes makes an effort to control her bilious stomach. "I have never… Had the privilege… Of riding with wyvern knights."
'sign'"Hm? Oh. I apologise. I've been watching for some sigh of enemy fleet movements."
'prevented'"That's the point: we don't know about it. Everything our spies tell us says that their force is well within our ability to best, and it is only the difficulty in maintaining our supply lines that has preventing an attack like this being made in years past. But they know that also. We know that our black powder weapons have radically changed the calculus but so far as they know, this is simply an overbold prince trying to do what his forebears could not."
Extraneous 'at'?We, at least she didn't hit at an equites-
"EYUK!"
-but perhaps it would have been best to check that Giselle wasn't following us first.
Amusing chapter.