DelightedOne
I trust you know where the happy button is?
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Heh. Heartsongs mentions always make me happy.
This is actually pretty great. Honestly I don't know if it would be helpful but my main "tactic" when I'm writing is to make a mind-movie of the plot and if I don't like it the problem is usually on the primary concept I used not being compatible with one of the other elements in the current version.
If his headspace was hard to get into then you could try to develop his character a bit more in your head with other things(basically trying to make a profile for him), that way you can have a clear idea of how he sees the world.