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    Safer upper crust, that is interesting. What is safer upper crust and what does that mean in Hell?
    And does Lilith have the power to create a Futa dick to fuck Charlie with it and breed her as Lucifer can breed Charlie?
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    Maybe I'll just make it an honorary title, they don't use in day to day conversations and definitely not in front of Lucifer. Maybe when they use the title, they are saying they are representing that sin for him and not actually the leader.
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    I'm getting really tired, running around trying to get the meds and the work day before it, I'm going to bed. Hopefully I'll start feeling better tomorrow or friday.
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    Thought. Beezlebub had Gluttony sin as a servant and sex slave for a while or maybe not sex slave? Beal would stay fatihful to Lilith unless allowed, and Wrath' sin is a student of Satan
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    I have watched the final episodes. If you can watch it, do so but I have so many complaints. I liked a lot. Its got good parts, but episodes 7 and 8 are a mess of underwhelming plot beats and action scenes mixed in with good ideas.
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    So the average person exists in a world of Overlords and Fallen who create the resources and environments of Hell and tries to navigate the Contracts that stipulate where the power flows as power equals things to buy or be paid in
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    Sleep. Talk contracts and overlords and Hell econnmmy later.

    How does the Son it into this social and money system?
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    His families troubles started when the dad wanted to get enough money to buy some land and a home away from the chaos of the lawless parts of the city and into the safer upper crust area. Money and the pursuit of the power that comes with it is a major motivation for the son in the beginning.
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    Thoughts on the divisions of Hell. Charlie grows up in what could be called the nation of Hell. Under Lilith, there has developed law and culture unifying Sinners and Fallen, this society is heavily connected to the Make Hell Heaven but with blackjack and hookers. The shared worldview is that Hell is a plane of cosmic entertainment.
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    Interesting. So power comes with standards in Lilith's queendom
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    She doesn't have the time or resources to punish everyone so she holds those up above to a higher standard to make an example for those below, unknowingly creating a strange sort of culture where the higher you rise the less failure is tolerated.
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    On power scaling, what I find works best for soft magic which is what I feel you'd want with the reality warping nature of Hell is defined spheres of power and limits on range and size of demonic magic. Overlords with different concepts and motifs behind their powers like the Radio Demon
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    Conan with pyromancy and blood lava and other demonic destructions at his beck and call. Conan of the nuclear hellblade and the kaiju shapeshifting, can't forget that. Man, demon combat must be so metal and terrifying to watch
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    Its almost eleven for me, going to have to get some sleep. Going to be crawling around attics tomorrow taking a look at a broken ac. Still some really good idea's, I feel like so much of its really getting settled in. The background world building with hell, Lilith and Lucifer's relationships, its all coming together.
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    Its fun for me to talk this kinda of stuff. Sleep well.
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    And did you see the 33 second vid of Charlie making Adam cry?
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    I'm thinking Abel's death was such a horrible experience that's what allowed Lilith to finally take over, and before that Eve was still sort of in charge, if slowly being corrupted and worn down into falling. And yes if Charlie found out she would think of the two as her brothers.
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    I'm getting tired. I'm going to bed. But tomorrow is friday and the weekend. Fucking finally. this weeks been long. We can talk more then.
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    How work?
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    To answer your last question before bed, that's a philosophical question preachers, philosophers and popes, have been wondering about for thousands of years now and the general consensus has been as long as you actively try to atone for them and repent your good.
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    Its a question I put in as the problem of Hell as a setting is, the more worse someone has to be to go to Hell, the worse a character they are to write about
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    And I am liking this idea if you are into it, love to chat more of it
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    I like how you have vets from the Warlord Era. Plenty with scary Quirks I bet. Ones once celebrated now feared
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    Shared visiting each other households?
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    The gift giving thing, see I don't ever find that in smut. A girl body modding and mind controlling herself for her love. It doesn't happen
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    It shows how much we rely on a dude overcoming the will of a girl and imposing upon them instead of just, asking
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    How your morning
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    So have basically a bunch of traumatized war vets that have committed a bunch of crimes all in the name of keeping the peace back when Villains were basically taking over, and none of them have been given the resources or help they need, and you have a bunch of stories like that of people and systems that were created out of desperate measures and never properly dealt with.
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    So for corruption in the hero systems its less about how the systems itself is broken and more that the issues it does have, there's no political will or any type of movement to fix it. So for the average person they have no idea abut how many issues are hiding underneath the surface waiting to explode.
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    And then of course if you have a super powerful or useful quirk your going to get the attention, money and opportunities, that other people won't. And if you have a quirk that is scary, like mind control, you will get discriminated against for that, but that's another topic entirely.
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    Would you like more of Frozen Dream?
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    The girls need to form love with each other and have hobbies and ambitions with the clan supporting their interests
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    Of course, that's the fun parts that keep a girl a complete character and not a piece of furniture, although that might be something Hinata's into. Anyway, night. Talk to you tomorrow if I get a chance.
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    Sleep well and have a good work day
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    I recall a book called Graceling. The character had the power to survive any situation, but she thought it was a fighting power because she'd survive by killing whoever got in her way. For escaping a situation, does that include lethal force with Gavin?
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    And in the first Naruto arc, how is the Fox mutating Tsuande's desire and love, and what is the serious starting point? Secluded training after Sasuke beats him?
    Her finding him almost half dead and the Fox's Chakra entering her as she heals Naruto?
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    Five buck says they don't got the fetish energy for it but a guy can dream of impregnated femboy baby mamas.

    Would Gewn make a girlfriend out of the earphones music quirk girl if spiders win?
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    Interesting duality. Sub is bad while Dom is good
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    A nice little inversion of the usual story. Sub is what happens when Robin really embraces her past self and try's to control her children instead of letting them go. Its not pure evil, but it is embracing her darker more controlling nature and has the potential to go much worse.
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    Naruto, what's our first arc? Our starting point for characters
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    Very cool idea with the fists and feet.
    With my work. I'm wanting bimbo domistiication and slave harem, but can't make the girls stupid as that is boring and personality and agency are key, even if manipualted
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    Tsunade starts getting pressured by Jiraiya and others to stay. The more she teaches Naruto the more involved she seems to be getting back into the Ninja world, and the knowledge that as the jinchuriki, Naruto will one day be used as a weapon and the fear of losing him hangs over her head, until there is a breaking point.
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    Setting up next arc
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    An argument breaks out, Naruto wanting a definite answer as to what she feels about him and Tsunade wanting a promise that he wouldn't get himself killed trying to be Hokage, leaves them both heart broken and angry. I'm at this point. Right now I'm trying to figure out a way that feels natural for this argument to get settled and for the two to start their relationship. What do you think so far?
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    Zelo. Could Naruto seduce and fuck Garra to gain power over the Sand village
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    Hail your eternal demon fox emperor god king
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    Turn Ninja arts over into personal defense and hobbies or oh, combat sports?
    And will Naruto be getting some cool Taijutsu? I always liked the Subtle and Strong Fist styles and disliked how there aren't a lot of cool Taijustus. Where are the burning fire fist? The shadow kick styles? No variety
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    I'm thinking he find a way to make clones of his fist and and feet as he;s fighting, blending in a few illusions, and maybe even have him grow a couple fox tails, all to combined together to make it seem like your fighting someone with a hundred limbs.
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    Naruto helping Tusume show off her yandere bitch side to her kids to seduce them?
    I imagine that character wise, taking someone's mom away from them for the orphan Naruto would be a enraging thought. And incest sharing out a milf to their son and daughter is good vibes
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    Switch. Definitely want to fuck his two moms and sister
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    I'm going to bed, my stomach's been hurting a little since this afternoon. See you tomorrow when the votes have a little bit more time to settle in and I know if the next chapters going to be for spiders or chainsaws.
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    Hoping spiders
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    What sort of ninja jutsu you want him to learn?
    Lean more into the taijustu or other stuff? How do you present danger when his wife is tusande?
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    She's aware its not normal. That its the reason her husband left and her families broken, and there's this combination of self loathing and hatred at her husband she's crippled with. She knows if she exposes her true self to people, it will terrify them, but at the same time she can't help herself.
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    So she'll hide it until she runs into Naruto, who is so desperate for love and affection, her obsessive needs are worshiped and encouraged.
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    I'm going to suggest something interesting. She becomes Naruto's pet, but Kiba is Naruto's friend so he also has her be Kiba's mommy pet. Tsume lovs her son. Any relationship with Naruto would have to evolve from that without breaking that bond.
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    Played a little bit of Spider Man 2. I find the web slinging clunky and the web zip weird as it has to work on only highlighted areas. The combat doesn't hurl you at people like in a batman game, which is odd. However, the general feel, intro to the story, and gameplay is fucking amazing.
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    the interviews still a couple hours away, but I tell you how it went when i get back.
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    As Naruto, I don't think he'll ever become a traitor, but the village will take a back seat to his family. And considering Sasuke turns traitor, maybe Naruto will think its his responsibility to fix him and make sure he's stays here at home as his concubine.
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    As for Naruto's relationship with his kids. I'm not sure haven't thought that far ahead in the story.
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    How you like Tomas interlude? Curious as you have spoken of doing Seveist worldbuilding before.
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    There'a fine line to be tred here. Keeping that edge while having it be soft. And do you want a religious debate interlude?
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    Maybe later, I'm going to go get some dinner. Probably pizza or something.
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    Pizza is good stuff. Thanks for reading our stuff
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    No fucking power for two days
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    Yeah the family is a mess, but by the end they do love each other. One of favorite lines in the movie was when he and Arthur are arguing and Arthur admits he never wanted to be king and he was a little insecure if he was doing a good job or not and Orm was shocked because he had grown up with his father telling him that one day Arthur would challenge him for the throne and win.
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    Since Arthur's powers and connection to Atlantis was stronger.
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    Read Tomas interlude?
    Also, this angle gets more weird with them being of different skin tones which is a ocean of political subtext
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    The cage movie sounds interesting but depressing
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    More space magic and demons
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    Sith alchemy might as well been magic fueled by cocaine with some of the shit it pulled out, but it was one of the funnest powers the EU added to the sith.
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    Give Jedi TK and Sith more classic sorcery stuff like fire and lightning and other magical elemental forces
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    But then the dreams people have about him start to turn into nightmares and he doesn't know how to stop it, all the suddenly all the fame he had morphs into a whole bunch of people hating him. Then it becomes kind of commentary on how destructive cancel culture and celebrity worship has become.
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    By the end of it the guys life and totally been ruined by the whole thing. He had to stay away from his wife and kids because the negative attention he brought on them was too much. He was a professor who wanted to publish a book on evolution, but nobody bought it, they only cared that he was the dream guy.
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    Again a lot sadder than i thought it would be. The first half pretty cool with the whole dream thing but by the end of it I was sad and a little confused since they didn't explain how any of it worked. Would not recommend. Although Nicholas Cage gave an amazing performance, totally over showed everyone else there.
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    What for Deku mom?
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    So something that could feasibly be built with enough money and high tech gadgets added on, but with just enough bullshit that if your paying close attention you'll notice something's wrong.
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    How you want to go further with the corruption of Deku and Ochako?
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    Starting to get into the sexual acts and layerings
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    Tonight I will respond in detail with thoughts to your latest update
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    I could see her getting revenge on her family by really embracing the breeding wife thing for Shoto out of love instead of Quirk combination and wanting to make loads of money as a new ambition
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    She's a blank canvas to play with in terms of personality and interests. With social class being the one canon bit to act as fuel
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    The brother though, what for him?
    The sister easily fits into maid role or something else like that which is domestic
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